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Posted: Wed Jan 02, 2008 2:15 am Post subject: Senscible Mistakes! Chapter 17! New! tell me what you think! |
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[b]Title:[/b] [b][size=18]Senscible Mistakes[/size][/b]
[b]Author Notes:[/b]Hello everyone. This is my most recent fan fic. I'm not sure if anyone will enjoy it but I do hope so! Love you all!
[b]Rating:[/b] Pg-Pg 13
[b]Main Charecters:[/b]Right now it is Sandy and Brendon!
[b]Side note:[/b] Sorry about my spelling errors in the story or whenever i type I just suck at that kinda thing >.< So here we go with Sensible Mistakes Chapter 1!
[size=18][b]Sensible Mistakes[/b][/size]
[b]Sandy’s P.O.V[/b]
“Can I have a White Chocolate Frap please?” I heard my first customer say at the counter. It was a very cute boy that came in every Sunday for his frap. He always seems quit shy around me but I never think much of it when I hand back his change. While I walked up to the side counter to hand him his hot drink. It happened. Clumsy me, I spilt coffee all over his black coat that was buttoned half way.
“Oh my god. I am so sorry” as he then laughed and smirked at me. I then asked my friend Brandi if she can fix him up a bigger size coffee from my mistake. As I then walked around the counter to help him with the coffee on his jacket he said “Don’t worry about it.” I then quickly replied with “Is there anything I can do?” He looked at me and raised his eyebrow “Hm, well there is one thing.” As he looked at me flirtingly. “And what’s that?” I said with curiosity. “Will you join me in having this coffee?” I started blushing like crazy. He is so handsome. His dark brown/black hair covered the left side of his face and dark brown eyes. “Of course I will!” I said with almost the most confidence in myself. As we sat in the sun light where we both could see each other perfectly. As he then put out his hand and said “I’m Brendon. But you can call me anything you’d like, well that associates with my name of course” we laughed. As I then gently shook his hand and said “I’m Sandy.”
[b]Brendon’s P.O.V[/b]
Sandy. What a beautiful name I thought while I was still shaking her hand. “Well hello” I smiled. She smiled back with her brown eyes and we stared for a moment. Her French black curls never left placement and her smile almost never left her face. She’s so gorgeous. I’ve always thought that, since every Sunday Id come in here,but I think it even more now. Then she broke the silence with saying “Can I have a sip?” she laughed. “Oh course my lovely.” She made a flirty smile towards me and giggled a little. But just then I saw her eye someone walking into the door. Please don’t be her boyfriend I hoped in my head. As she then said “Oh no. It’s my boss. I’d better get back to work” she said in a disappointed tone. She stood up but I grabbed her hand and said “Hey Sandy? What are you doing tomorrow?” She looked over at me and said “I have work tomorrow,” She paused as I’m now disappointed. “but I’m available Tuesday.” She smiled. I smiled back and said “So meet you here? Around 5:30ish?” Sandy then cocked her head and said “Sounds good, I’ll see you Tuesday, Brendon” the way she said my name made me shiver with excitement as I saw her walk behind the counter I then walked out to my car.
[b]Sandy’s P.O.V[/b]
I looked over my shoulder to make sure he had gone as a big grin came over my face. As I saw Brandi walk up to me and smile back at me and said “What happened?” as she nudged my shoulder. “Oh my god he’s so perfect!” I blurted out on accident.
[b]To be continued…. I do hope you enoyed! More to come! =)[/b][size=12][/size] _________________ "I'm gonna high kick you in the face"

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Wow. This sounds as if it's goin to get really good XD! Please update asap XD ly x _________________ Ambie bambie,
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Come on . For me . X _________________ Ambie bambie,
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yeah i think this needs to be written in......right......about..........NOW! _________________ ------------------------
It's only because I had the world Upon a string.
"Those tempurpedic beds are a son of b**ch, man."- Jon Walker!
always remember William gets to sit on the car and drink tea while his bitches do his work!
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awwwww come on.......please :[[[[[ _________________ ------------------------
It's only because I had the world Upon a string.
"Those tempurpedic beds are a son of b**ch, man."- Jon Walker!
always remember William gets to sit on the car and drink tea while his bitches do his work!
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What really happened to the first album!
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Scencible Mistakes Chapter 2!
Brendon’s P.O.V
Wow I thought to myself while getting into my car. I keep on rewinding her saying my name over and over in my head. As then I hear my phone ring. It’s Marc:
Brendon: “Hello?”
Marc: “Hey, man what’s up?”
Brendon: “I got myself a date Tuesday” I said all confident.
Marc: He laughed “Nice, how’d you get your confidence up? I know you….you get all shy or all happy and hyper.”
Brendon: As I laugh I start to think back to those embarrassing moments of rejection. “Hm, well I’m different now man, but anyway Ill talk to ya later.
Marc: Alright, see ya.
*click*
Sandy’s P.O.V
“So, you excited about your date?” Brandi asked. She’s been asking me this all day because I won’t stop smiling and I say the same thing every time “Hehe, maybe”. “Well, I say tomorrow we go shopping.” She knew that I can’t refuse an invite to the mall! “Well okay!” I said back even more excited. “So where are you guys going? Is it casual? Formal?” Brandi said all interested. As it just accured to me that I have absolutely no idea. “Uh…” I said. “What? Sandy! Now how are we supposed to get you an outfit?” I started laughing and tried to calm her down “Don’t worry, I’m the one going on the date over here.” We both started laughing. As we then started to close down the store for the night I headed to the back and closed some things back there as I heard the bell hit the door showing that someone was coming in. I heard a sound of whispering up at the counter but I was sure that it was because I was so far away. As then felt someone tickle my hips. I screamed. As I feel into someones arms I looked up and there he was Brendon. "Hey my lovely. I didnt mean to scare you like that." That's the second time hes called me that it’s so sweet and adorable! I smiled and said “It’s okay.” I said in a soft tone as he said “Well, I was thinking about you all day, and I was thinking that we never talked abo-.” I cut him off “About what we are going to do on Tuesday?” We laughed in unison and he said “Yes. I was thinking we’d go to the hill top.” I smiled lightly and said “Sounds good!” He smirked and said “Can’t wait.” He walked out and headed to his car. Brandi then quickly asked me a million questions all I could think in my mind was…shut up…but I kind of enjoyed her excitement. “We’re going to the hill top by the way.” I said all happy. Brandi then was excited and said “I have the perfect idea for an outfit!” Brandi is very odd, but herself. Which she loves shopping and is on her mind a lot. So excuse her. Nah. She's great. We live together in our 2 bedroom apartment. We just had finished closing the shop. Home is always fun.
Brendon’s P.O.V
It is now the next day and I woke up with a big yawn. My white tank was messed up showing my stomach a little but I didn’t bother to fix it. As I went into the shower I blurted out chorus lines from my favorite songs. Since I live alone I don’t have to be embaressed.My hair dries as I drive to the mall because I made plans with my friend Brittany. I’ve arrived at the mall and I see her there. She has long blonde hair with long red strikes that were choppy through her hair. Were only friends but everyone that sees us together think of us as more because we pick on each other and what not but she’s more of a sister to me. “Hey Brittsey” That’s what I like to call her. “Hey Bren” We walk into the mall and I feel Brittney pull my shirt to take me into a store. She loves to go into Fredricks, Victoria’s Secret and such. Embarrassing really to be seen in there but I don’t mind. What guy does? The lacey underwear fascinates us. Funny really. As she pulls me into Victoria’s Secret I follow her as she starts asking me opinions.
Sandy’s P.O.V
We just arrived at the mall and Brandi and I wanted to go to the beloved Hollister. As we walk in we grab almost everything in sight but what I decided to buy was a grey jacket that had fuzz on the inside and had the Hollister eagle design n the front. With black tight pants. And I already have a shirt picked out at home for tomorrow. “Hey Brandi? Do you think we can head to Victoria’s Secret?” She comes up and nudges me “Oh! Oh course.” She said all excited like I wanted panties for my date with Brendon if just in case we were gonna do something or something like that. Well she was right. You never know. I smiled at her remark and as we walked in and I looked to the side where I saw the cutest, most definitely sexiest pink and black laced lingerie. I grabbed it from the rack to go try it on as I was looking around I accidently ran into someone. “Oh my god I’m so sor- BRENDON!” How embarrassing I run into the guy I’m having a date with tomorrow with panties in my hand. “Sandy? Oh hey!” As another women comes out and says “Come on Brendon let’s go. Oh hello! Who’s this Brendon?” My mouth is dropped and I’m completely stunned. “I’m...I’m…Sandy.” Brendon then speaks quickly with “This is my friend Brittney.” My face relaxes and I said “Oh! Your friend! Hello Brittney!” I said all happy like but not noticing that I have pink undies in my hands. They laughed and said goodbye. Well now Brendon thinks he’s gonna get lucky.
To be continued…. =D more to come! _________________ "I'm gonna high kick you in the face"

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W00T!!!! YAY!!!!!! _________________ ------------------------
It's only because I had the world Upon a string.
"Those tempurpedic beds are a son of b**ch, man."- Jon Walker!
always remember William gets to sit on the car and drink tea while his bitches do his work!
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Oh my! How embarrasing. I can't wait until you update again *blinky eye lashes* x _________________ Ambie bambie,
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OMG! I noticed that I like screwed up the story so there is like a minor edit in there! _________________ "I'm gonna high kick you in the face"
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I think you should update today XD. X _________________ Ambie bambie,
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Sencible Mistakes 3!
Brendon’s P.O.V
My mind is about to explode from laughter. Those pink panties she was hol-wait a minute does that mean she is thinking what I’m thinking. I made a small laugh under my breath as Brittsey remarked with “You got your eye on her, don’t you?,” She laughed and continued “and what’s even better for you is that you already know what she’ll be wearing underneath.” She busted into laughter as I just looked at her like SHUT UP but only in my mind. Yet she did have a point. So I spoke my mind with saying “You have a good point.” We chuckled. As we started to pass up Fredrick’s Brittsey couldn’t stop herself from walking in there. “Brittsey can we leave now ?” I said with a whiney tone. Which I don’t do unless something’s bugging me or I’m simply excited. I bet you can guess which one. Brittsey then came out of the dressing room with her lingerie on and everything which she never does. It was this white complicated looking dress that stopped right before you could see everything with big white boots. She looked good I must admit but then another dressing room opened and you heard a girl call in her friend for advice on if it looked good ECT. The girl said “Brandi come here. This looks so hot.” And she laughed without noticing her voice from before I saw her walk out. It was Sandy…again. She was in this very sexy looking bra and bikini bottom that was hot pink with silver polka dots and the lace around was silver as well. She was right from before, she looked hot. Especially with the fishnets that were laced all the way up with the clips hooking to her bikini bottoms. I saw her look over so I hid behind the wall. One thing men know is that women don’t like the guys there seeing to see them half naked before you get to the bedroom. As I then heard the door shut then the other door swung open hitting my knee. “Oh sorry Br-“I cut her off with saying “Shhh” and walked her to the cash register and then try to get out of there as fast as possible.
Sandy’s P.O.V
I stared at myself in the mirror a little longer and decided that this wasn’t the right outfit to get. So I found another one that looked very similar it was a pink bra with a silver lace covering almost all of it. But there was a see through silver over cape down to the end of my bikini bottom. And with the leggings went up to about my knees and then a strap holding them up to my panties. I look even hotter, almost my goal in life other then my dream of being a band hairstylist. I then got dressed and brought everything up to the counter to buy and I was pretty satisfied. So we left the mall and it was late. Around 8ish. We were at the mall from 12 to 8 today. That sounds about right. Brandi can’t leave in till at least 8 hours of shopping. Funny really. Time for sleep so I can wake up early and do make up forever and get ready. Fun Fun.
(Next morning)
My hair is all crazy and my makeup is smudge on my face from the mistake of not taking it off the day before. I then look over at the clock to notice I slept in till 12:32pm. My eyes bloodshot, hair messy and makeup smeared I ran down the stairs to see Brandi making out with some guy that I’ve never seen before. He looked up and I quickly ran back up the stairs because I look terrible. I have 4 hours to get ready for my date. Plenty of time. I believe so…you never know with me and my fascination with hair and makeup and such. Now what I need to find out is how do you take the full outfit of lingerie with you when you can’t wear the whole outfit? I know! I’ll taunt him like all those other girls do with their little gift baggies in hand. So I grabbed my pink bag that I had from an old birthday party. And I folded it all in nicely. It was now close to 1pm, conveniently still 4 hours left. I grabbed my towel and headed into the shower and put all my hair products in. Fabulous as usual. Yet always room for improvement. I always say things like I look great and things like that but I just try to boost my confidence. As I start to put on my make by M.A.C I start to feel prettier as each different style of makeup I put on. Yet I have trouble making my eyeliner completely perfect it takes me about 30 minutes each time. It’s now about 2:30pm from everything I’ve been doing but I didn’t eat yet. So I walked down stairs to two people making a meal out of each other. “Don’t mind me” I said in a sarcastic tone. I walked by and grabbed a pancake from the stack and poured syrup and a small amount of butter on top. This almost couldn’t be taking me long enough it’s already 3:30 by the time I finish. Yet let’s skip to when I arrive at the coffee shop to meet my Brendon. My? Uh…never mind that. As I see him sitting lushesly in the same place we were Sunday. He spots me and starts to walk over.
Brendon’s P.O.V
There she is gorgeous as ever. But I must keep my cool. Yet as I see her standing there a boy comes up to her and smacks her ass like it’s no big deal you hear her scream and the kid laughs and walks away like he just won the jackpot. She runs up too me in her boots and says “I hate that.” As I then look at her and say “Don’t worry I won’t let it happen again.” She smiles and says “So to the hill top?” She swaggers to the car as I notice her little pink baggy. Convenient much? Yes. I think so.
-End of Chapter 3-
Hello everyone! I hope you enjoyed this chapter! Next chapter gets more interesting! _________________ "I'm gonna high kick you in the face"
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Yay updatage!
Brendon teh perve!! X _________________ Ambie bambie,
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ahahah yes I agree... perve
you know Amber... if you weren't on your phone, you would've used pervy by now wouldn't you???
or are you over pervy (please say you're not please say you're not)
oh well sorry for spaming
i really like it
actually... i don't like it really...
I LOVE IT!!!!
UPDATE! RGHT NOW!
cause if you don't, I'll keep bugging you until you do... and you know i can
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dun dun duuuhhhnnnn _________________ Say my name, and his in the same breath, I
Dare you to say they taste the same,
Let the leaves fall off in the summer
And let December glow in flames
Brace myself and let go,
Start it over again in Mexico
These friends, they don't love you
They just love the hotel suites, now
I don't care what you think
'Cuz as long as it's about me
The best of us can find happiness
In misery
Oh, take a chance, let your body get a tolerance,
I'm not a chance, but a heat wave in your pants
Pull a breath like another cigarette,
Pawn Shop, I'm trading up (trading up)
I'm the oracle in my chest,
Let the guitar scream like a fascist,
Sweat it out, shut your mouth,
Free love on the streets, but
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Chapter 4!
Brendon’s P.O.V
I followed her into the car. I can’t wait for the hill top I thought in my head. Yet my thoughts got interrupted when my phone rang. Ryan? I haven’t talked with him in a while but we’re still best of friends. I pick up:
Brendon: Hello?!
Ryan: Brendon! I need your help.
I heard him say as he started to lose breath.
Brendon: Ryan are you alright?
The first thing that went through my mind was that he was having another Asthma attack.
*click*
He didn’t answer me. “Sandy. We need to head over to Ryan’s house I think something’s wrong.” Her face turned red as if she was scared. She replied with “Is he going to be alright?” all I could do is tell her “I don’t know.” We rushed to his house and we saw him curled up in a ball on the couch shaking. I saw Sandy rush to the couch and stroke his hair. “Don’t worry we’ll take care of you.” She was being so caring to him, even though she’s never met him. I saw her run up to the counter and grab the phone. 911 I think I saw her dial. It was dead silent except for the huffs and puffs coming from my best buddy Ryan as Sandy said “Hello, we need an ambulance here right away please.” She was so calm and ready for action. As I heard her tell him the address I noticed Ryan starting to cough up blood. Sandy dropped the phone. “Oh my god. Ryan?” He responded with more coughs while trying to speak in a shaky tone. “I have help coming on the way. “ Sandy said hoping he’d respond and trying to be as comforting as possible.
Ryan’s P.O.V
Who is she? I’ve never seen her before and she’s treating me like we’ve been friends for years. She makes me want to hug her ever time she walks by. Like I’ve met her once before. I also don’t know what’s going on with me. It’s not an asthma attack. I know this for sure. I think. I hear the ambulance coming down the street and parking right in front of my house. All of the sudden my breathing is getting worse and worse. As I felt dizzy I tried to tell her “Thank yo-“
Sandy’s P.O.V
He fainted. As I hear the ambulance bardge in, they put Ryan on a gurney and put him in the van fast. He’s gone. What do I do now? I’m lost as I feel Brendon grab me and kiss me lightly. “Thank You, for freaking out over my close friend.” He laughed quietly and I smiled. We then jumped into the car and headed to the hospital. Brendon then asked for his room and it was room A712 second floor. We rushed into the elevator but it seemed to never arrive one floor up. I then ran down the hall with Brendon and finally arrived at his door. We walked in slowly. It was plain white in the rooms just like the look on all our faces. I then heard Ryan say “Hello?” I walked up to him and said “Hello. I’m Sandy.” I smiled at him and he attempted to do so back. He then said “I make a great first impression don’t I?” He was a charmer. “Better one then me. I had a break down.” We laughed at each other. Brendon then walked into the conversation and said “You gave us a scare there, Ryan.” They began to talk back and forth to each other as I lost attention of what they were saying and started to study Ryan’s features. His smile was pearly white and one that made a smile never leave my face. He had a soft voice and looked like he didn’t let many people get close to him. Right then the doctor walked in. “Hello. Ryan Ross?” Ryan cleared his thought “Yes?” The doctor walked closer. ”Yes well. I’m happy to tell you that you were only having an asthma attack. This is getting worse. I do have to say. I need you to keep taking your inhaler even if you don’t want too.” Ryan’s face turned paler. If that was even possible. “Ye…Yes…sir.” He seemed frightened but I wouldn’t know why. “Alright. Well we’re going to keep you over night and you can go home tomorrow. And this is your girlfriend I?” The doctor asked. Neither of us answered we just smiled and looked at each other as I then noticed I was holding his hand. Yet Brendon wanted to make it clear to the doctor. “They aren’t they just met.” We stared at Brendon but I didn’t let his hand go. I think it was for comfort but I just couldn’t put his hand down. Then the doctor then told us we need to leave the room. “See you tomorrow, Ryan.” I said just to make him feel more comfortable. I don’t know why but it seems like I’ve met him before. I believe he’s the same age or somewhere close to mine. I don’t even know why I’m so worried about him. Maybe it’s because he so important to Brendon?
Ryan’s P.O.V
I’m all alone now. The white walls frightened me as they seemed to come closer and closer. The doctor walked back into the room. “Ryan. How many times do you have to come into my office for you to understand that the inhaler is your life saver?” I don’t know why I don’t use the inhaler. Yes I do. It was the worst tasting thing you will ever have to taste. Every time I take it, it brings me back to all the times I have to come to the hospital. Especially the time when Brendon was here…7 years ago. I try to shake the thought from my head. I’ve feared the thought for ages. But you would’nt know what I’m talking about. “I don’t know sir.” I said to my doctor.
-End of Chapter 4-
ooooo same day update!? haha hope you enjoyed! _________________ "I'm gonna high kick you in the face"
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Jah i would have XD. And i will never be over pervy. I miss him . I hope if's still in my sig =\ if best had be. X _________________ Ambie bambie,
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