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Holy*Wentz!
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PostPosted: Sat Apr 05, 2008 11:47 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

awww thats sweet really and i hate sweet crap but that was my kind of sweet
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PostPosted: Sat Apr 05, 2008 8:03 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Lol! Im confused! lol you make me laugh xD
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 07, 2008 11:30 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

ookay, my best friend in real life ashley a.k.a *Queen_of_hearts* on here is incredible mushy about everything and i like the more classy kind stuff which is what that was... get it now?

and shes currently next to me looking up pictures of Bden
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"Those tempurpedic beds are a son of b**ch, man."- Jon Walker!

always remember William gets to sit on the car and drink tea while his bitches do his work!

BRING BACK THE EXCLAIMATION!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

made by those losers briony and mykie.....

What really happened to the first album!

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PostPosted: Mon Apr 07, 2008 5:58 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Oh I get it I get it! Very cool! Im likie that too I like the more fancy i guess you would say kind of love where it isnt all about f'ing. You know?
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PostPosted: Tue Apr 08, 2008 3:28 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

exactly and if it is it should be classy and not go into COMPLETE detail all the time. i knew there was a reason i love you other then ur just amazing!
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It's only because I had the world Upon a string.

"Those tempurpedic beds are a son of b**ch, man."- Jon Walker!

always remember William gets to sit on the car and drink tea while his bitches do his work!

BRING BACK THE EXCLAIMATION!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

made by those losers briony and mykie.....

What really happened to the first album!

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PostPosted: Tue Apr 08, 2008 10:01 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Aww thanx! But the other relationship isnt too classy lol!
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PostPosted: Sat May 03, 2008 9:41 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

AHHHHH! ONCE AGAIN! Im slow Sad Im soo sorry guys :'(
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PostPosted: Thu May 08, 2008 3:09 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

grr
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Say my name, and his in the same breath, I
Dare you to say they taste the same,
Let the leaves fall off in the summer
And let December glow in flames

Brace myself and let go,
Start it over again in Mexico
These friends, they don't love you
They just love the hotel suites, now

I don't care what you think
'Cuz as long as it's about me
The best of us can find happiness
In misery

Oh, take a chance, let your body get a tolerance,
I'm not a chance, but a heat wave in your pants
Pull a breath like another cigarette,
Pawn Shop, I'm trading up (trading up)

I'm the oracle in my chest,
Let the guitar scream like a fascist,
Sweat it out, shut your mouth,
Free love on the streets, but
In the alley and I ain't that cheap, now
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PostPosted: Fri May 09, 2008 12:06 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Chapter 12!

Sandy’s P.O.V

I wasn’t done with him, that’s why we stand now in this empty room with a bed pushed off to the side, and us walking toward it. I then feel the ground slip from my feet as now Brendon has me lying in his arms, and me holding myself up around his neck. I take one hand and mess with his greasy hair. The whole time he’s just holding me, I don’t know what he has in mind and I’m not afraid to find out. He places my body down on the bed but we were sitting up, I saw him close his eyes and put them in his hands and says “I think I’m truly in love with you,” Wow. Brendon may have said that before but the powers in his words make you want to turn his cheek so you can just to see his lips honestly say that. I already know how to respond, there isn’t a doubt in my mind here with him, and I will not second guess myself.

London’s P.O.V

His eyes slowly reach my now, and all I can do is stare. Yet at that very moment I hear him break the silence with “Baby, I…I wouldn’t leave you like this, I will never die with you in my arms,” He said in a very choked up and shaky voice. I smiled back at what he had said and I then laid myself next to him on top of his covers. I wrap my arms around him trying my best to stay away from the many tubes running into his body. “Babe…Baby I love you I know you’ve heard it a million times but, I never want us to be apart.” I said while crying into his shoulder lightly. I felt him then grip my hand and pull it towards him as he then spoke with “You know how I wasn’t going to come over today? Well look in my jacket pocket, I was going to surprise you at your door tonight.” I don’t know what to expect but my legs start to give out as I try to walk across the room to reach in his perfectly folded jacket. As I unfold his jacket a locket falls to the floor and I hear him say “Don’t open it, don’t open it till we can’t be together for some reason, if I ever have to leave you alone.” It was so beautiful, a silver heart shaped locket with our names engraved in it. He knows how to get me to fall for his charm so easily.

Ryan’s P.O.V

As I see her stroke the chain of the necklace all I want is to come up behind her, wrap my arms around her waist and kiss her neck just to hear her laugh. On our first date when she was there so perfectly and elegantly, I remember chasing her after our stroll to no where and I did that very thing and I fell in love with her laugh at that moment, as well as her smile. It was that same day she had been wearing the perfect red summer dress and red lipstick that made me want to kiss her so very gently. That day was so very perfect just like she is to me, the perfect face, the perfect facial expressions, and the perfect personality. How did I get her? Is all I can ask now, she always says “I don’t deserve you Ryan” and then she would begin to get teary eyed. But the truth is, I really don’t deserve her, but god am I happy to see her smiling face everyday. I’ve completely fallen for a girl that loves me back; this couldn’t be only a fairy tale.



Brendon’s P.O.V

I turn up to look at her; her face is trembling as well as the rest of her body. I reach to grab her hand and I bring it up and kiss it and I then begin to stroke her hand as she just blurted to me “I love you too, I don’t know how it happened but I’m so in love with you.” Her voice starts to crack as I hear her mumble a little to her self. We them sit there in silence together, and at the moment I lay my head on her lap and look up at her. “Hun, I think I’m going to head home, but I want you to come with me…” I then see her smile and nod. I don’t know what I’m planning on doing but I just want her there.

-End of Chapter 12-
SOrry it took soooooo long!!! But tell me what you think Smile
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PostPosted: Fri May 09, 2008 5:11 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

:O

i love the ryan and lauren thing

it's so beautiful ♥♥♥
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Say my name, and his in the same breath, I
Dare you to say they taste the same,
Let the leaves fall off in the summer
And let December glow in flames

Brace myself and let go,
Start it over again in Mexico
These friends, they don't love you
They just love the hotel suites, now

I don't care what you think
'Cuz as long as it's about me
The best of us can find happiness
In misery

Oh, take a chance, let your body get a tolerance,
I'm not a chance, but a heat wave in your pants
Pull a breath like another cigarette,
Pawn Shop, I'm trading up (trading up)

I'm the oracle in my chest,
Let the guitar scream like a fascist,
Sweat it out, shut your mouth,
Free love on the streets, but
In the alley and I ain't that cheap, now
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PostPosted: Sun May 11, 2008 2:43 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thanx Very Happy youre the best Bec!
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PostPosted: Mon May 12, 2008 3:16 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Chapter 13!

Sandy’s P.O.V

I don’t know what’s going to happen, but I’m nervous as hell. While we’re driving in the car we’re both pretty silent and till he said “My place isn’t the greatest, but I think you’ll come to like it.” At that moment we slowly roll into the garage. I see him jump out of the car and I look around trying to find him and there he was at my door waiting to open it for me. I looked at him and laughed and he put his hand out to me like I was a princess. Maybe he did love me. ”Make yourself at home Hun, ill be out in a minute” He went to the bathroom. I walk in and so far it looks really cute, it’s small but very homey, I take the liberty of touring the house myself and I make it to his bedroom. I can’t help it, I must enter. As I open the door with the lights off and I hear “Brendon, is that you?” I quickly slam the door shut and put my bangs in front of my face and begin to cry, for it was a women’s voice. How could he, that son of a b**ch. I then see Brendon wipe around the corner and he walks up to me not noticing I’m crying and says “Hey my lovely, I found you.” As he then comes towards me and wraps his arms around me, I push him away and look up at him. I saw his lips part from each other as of shock.

Brendon’s P.O.V

She’s crying…what did I do? I see the door behind her creek open, it was Rebecca…my ex girlfriend…I then see her rush towards me, she pushes me up against the wall and kisses me, hard. My eyes are shut as I then think, Sandy, she’s sitting there watching this, what am I doing? I push her off of me and look towards Sandy, her head is hung down and I see her starting to walk off with tears following behind. “Sandy, wait” she doesn’t listen so I reach for her arm and when I catch her I drop to my knees. My eyes are still pure white around but you can tell they’re teary eyed. “Sandy I’m sorry, baby I’m sorry” I walk my self over to her body on my knees and I wrap my arms around her and put my head on her stomach. I then feel a tap on my shoulder... ”Rebecca, go away.”

Ryan’s P.O.V

“Ryan, thank you so much, I don’t deserve this at all, or you for that matter.” She said it again the words of not deserving me. I stand up with my low energy and walk up to her and hold her close with our foreheads laying on one another, with our eyes filled with complete love I lift up her chin and say “No love, you don’t deserve me, you deserve so much better.” I then pecked her a few times and in between kisses she said “There’s no one better.” I love her so much, I long for another one of her long special kisses saved especially for me. “I love you, I love you so much.” I whispered in her ear. She pulled me back and said “I love you too.” We were once again stuck in a stare but I saw her close her eyes and I took the liberty of locking her lips with a kiss.

London’s P.O.V

I take in this sweet kiss for a few minutes wanting to be with him more and more as the door then opens it’s the doctor. “Hello, um sorry if I’m interrupting but Ryan needs his rest I must ask you to leave.” We both nod towards him and Ryan then said “Go home my baby, don’t worry about me and sleep well.” I smiled and kept connection with his eyes as I walked out the door. When the door fell shut I leaned against it and bit my lip, smiled and put the necklace around my neck. I’m the one that can actually say that she’s the luckiest girl alive, that I’ve found the one. I have no family to tell this too, I had to give them up for Ryan, they believed this horrible lie and now I’m left alone, but I’m not. I have Ryan.

-End of Chapter 13-

Hey guys Smile tell me what you think and what you think will happen ily all! Thanx for reading my story so far it makes you all awesome...
(My head hurtz Sad!!!!!!)
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PostPosted: Mon May 12, 2008 3:45 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

ohh YAY MY NAME MY NAME MY NAME!!

oh god I'm a whore

oh well i can do whore

*pole dances* Razz
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Say my name, and his in the same breath, I
Dare you to say they taste the same,
Let the leaves fall off in the summer
And let December glow in flames

Brace myself and let go,
Start it over again in Mexico
These friends, they don't love you
They just love the hotel suites, now

I don't care what you think
'Cuz as long as it's about me
The best of us can find happiness
In misery

Oh, take a chance, let your body get a tolerance,
I'm not a chance, but a heat wave in your pants
Pull a breath like another cigarette,
Pawn Shop, I'm trading up (trading up)

I'm the oracle in my chest,
Let the guitar scream like a fascist,
Sweat it out, shut your mouth,
Free love on the streets, but
In the alley and I ain't that cheap, now
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PostPosted: Tue May 20, 2008 6:37 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Bec is ple dancing Surprised LOL!

ILY BEC Very Happy
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PostPosted: Thu May 22, 2008 12:13 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

WRITE MORE NOWWWWW
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Say my name, and his in the same breath, I
Dare you to say they taste the same,
Let the leaves fall off in the summer
And let December glow in flames

Brace myself and let go,
Start it over again in Mexico
These friends, they don't love you
They just love the hotel suites, now

I don't care what you think
'Cuz as long as it's about me
The best of us can find happiness
In misery

Oh, take a chance, let your body get a tolerance,
I'm not a chance, but a heat wave in your pants
Pull a breath like another cigarette,
Pawn Shop, I'm trading up (trading up)

I'm the oracle in my chest,
Let the guitar scream like a fascist,
Sweat it out, shut your mouth,
Free love on the streets, but
In the alley and I ain't that cheap, now
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