Senscible Mistakes! Chapter 17! New! tell me what you think!

[musicmakesmeloco]

damnit!!!

and here i was sitting here thing you'd already updated!!!



noooo fair!!!!

need updates now!!!!!!


pwwease???
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Say my name, and his in the same breath, I
Dare you to say they taste the same,
Let the leaves fall off in the summer
And let December glow in flames

Brace myself and let go,
Start it over again in Mexico
These friends, they don't love you
They just love the hotel suites, now

I don't care what you think
'Cuz as long as it's about me
The best of us can find happiness
In misery

Oh, take a chance, let your body get a tolerance,
I'm not a chance, but a heat wave in your pants
Pull a breath like another cigarette,
Pawn Shop, I'm trading up (trading up)

I'm the oracle in my chest,
Let the guitar scream like a fascist,
Sweat it out, shut your mouth,
Free love on the streets, but
In the alley and I ain't that cheap, now

[Raindrop Rose]

Chapter 9!

Brendon’s P.O.V
I woke up in a sweat as I felt my body being shaken by Sandy as she says “You alright? Seriously?” I couldn’t lift my body up but I was to confident in this day to let Sandy have a worry about me. “Sandy, don’t worry I’m completely,” I sighed “good.” I said as I finished my sentence. Looking at my Mickey Mouse watch that I randomly had on my wrist for this not so childish day I saw that the small arm of Mickey’s was on the 10 and the long arm slightly past the 6 while the second hand was well, who keeps track. Well all of this means that we haven’t had an answer from the doctors in many hours and who knows how long I’ve been asleep. I scratch my head as I try to lean up as the first thing I see is a mirror. My hair was messy, eyes half shut, I looked like I haven’t washed for days. “I look just beautiful don’t I?” I said in a sarcastic tone looking over at Sandy.


Sandy’s P.O.V

He looks so hot right now he has no idea. Yet I didn’t let that show so I just giggled a little but my eyes could’ve shown a small amount of lust. Just then I look around to see that everyone had been gone including London. Hmm well what’s hotter than this? An empty hospital lounge with the guy that looks hotter then I’ve ever seen him. My lips are quivering at the sight of him, wanting to over come his large puckered lips. But before I could do anything or speak Brendon pounced on top of me and we were lying on the white dirty hospital floor. Normally I’d mine but not at this moment, for this moment is perfect. To be honest I’m very hot and turned on at this moment and my hair having a few grains of sand doesn’t bug me much. Im not normally dirty like this but his nice touch is just over coming me in so many ways almost like I cant refuse. Just then my body gets the chills and its almost like something is controlling all my moves to make them to pure perfection. I run my hands through his fluffy not so thick hair as I feel it rube against my cheeks as he moves to kissing my neck. I then start to groan. I’m surprised the nurses or some kind of doctor hasn’t came to stop us but the chairs are blocking there sight. So many things I want to shout but I try to contain myself. As I then giggle and say “Brendon!” in a very high pitched voice showing that he was being naughty. I feel his hand moving up my shirt. I gasp and release.


London’s P.O.V

I’m standing outside of the window where Ryan’s room is and all I can see is the tubes going into his body possibly the only thing keeping him alive at this very moment. Wet tears are whelming up on my face and they just seem to run down straight and clean. Yet as I look down its almost like I never cried like my tears never landed on the floor. Almost like when you see rain drops fall on a rose pedal and it just seems to disappear in the color or just disappearing all together. Speaking of a rose I remember one time long ago with Ryan…it was our first date actually and I saw him walk up with a rose in his hand and he snapped the stem and put it gently in my hair and it made my features seem so much more intense for that day I was wearing a very nice summer dress that matched well with my red lipstick. That I remember smearing all over Ryan’s cheek from kissing him. Memories. I sighed

-End of Chapter 9-
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[musicmakesmeloco]

ooooh dirty! *perves*

ILOVEYOUSARAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

it's so amazing!

such a great story!!!

iloveyousarah!

you're such a good writer!

ILOVESARAH!!!

did i mention iloveyou???
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Say my name, and his in the same breath, I
Dare you to say they taste the same,
Let the leaves fall off in the summer
And let December glow in flames

Brace myself and let go,
Start it over again in Mexico
These friends, they don't love you
They just love the hotel suites, now

I don't care what you think
'Cuz as long as it's about me
The best of us can find happiness
In misery

Oh, take a chance, let your body get a tolerance,
I'm not a chance, but a heat wave in your pants
Pull a breath like another cigarette,
Pawn Shop, I'm trading up (trading up)

I'm the oracle in my chest,
Let the guitar scream like a fascist,
Sweat it out, shut your mouth,
Free love on the streets, but
In the alley and I ain't that cheap, now

[Holy*Wentz!]

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did i mention iloveyou???[/quote]
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It's only because I had the world Upon a string.

"Those tempurpedic beds are a son of b**ch, man."- Jon Walker!

always remember William gets to sit on the car and drink tea while his bitches do his work!

BRING BACK THE EXCLAIMATION!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

made by those losers briony and mykie.....

What really happened to the first album!

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[Raindrop Rose]

I will as soon as possible!

I LOVE YOU TOO!
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"I'm gonna high kick you in the face"

[Raindrop Rose]

Mhy next chapter is almost done! Look out for that
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"I'm gonna high kick you in the face"

[Raindrop Rose]

[size=18][b]Chapter 10! [/b][/size]

[b]Brendon’s P.O.V[/b]

I lifted her arm up interlocking our hands holding them up while I kiss her. I then bring both of our hands lower to well, where my hard spot is. She gets the just of it and let me tell you my manly grunts made the silent room so much more intense. While loving every minute of it I hear a door creek open. Sandy and I make a complete stop as we try to stop our hard breaths, as we notice the positions we were in. Both my hands were gently brushed up against her cheeks as her hands were, well, fooling around. I hear her make a small giggle as I then hear London’s voice “Brendon? Sandy? Ello?” She seemed pretty curious but I wasn’t about to blow our cover. We remained silent as she sat as far as possible from us. Ha, well it’s not like I’m gonna let London ruin this. “Mmmm, mmmmm.” I heard her voice make. “Sandy,” I whispered “Sandy, I want you.” She brought her lips up to my ear and bit her lip and nibbled my ear. I started to move around for I’m quite ticklish. Hehe, well ticklish in…certain spots. As my eyebrow goes up, I grab her with a kiss. Next move is up to her.

[b]Sandy’s P.O.V [/b]

At that moment I move my lips lower to his neck with my hands exploring his torso, or to where ever my hands lead me. I love that little giggle he gives off when I press him a couple inches under his above his belly button right above that spot that you all can picture. Ha, I want him, bad. Yet I have him but am feeling guilty cause London is right beside us not knowing of it at all. As I feel Brendon’s hand clutch me close and take my shirt off…I suddenly don’t feel bad anymore. Love, love, love…who says it can’t happen in one day or in this short of time. I have fallen. To the point of he has me completely all over him. To where I kiss him and I fall all over again to where I can satisfied his needs just by hearing his grunts. He has me twisted around his finger. I love this, falling is fun but I don’t want to fall from him. But no. We have each other, yes. Mine. For maybe I have him in my palm as well.

[b]London’s P.O.V [/b]

This is bad. Me being alone, in this situation. Everyone knows that I’m not good at this. Not at all. The memories I had been thinking about before are clustered in my mind. Yet they make me smile inside, but cry on the outside. I just now opened my purse to find another tissue and a small note. I forgot to check this morning for my message Ryan leaves for me every morning that he slips under my door everyday before he goes to work. It read “Morning Lovely. I’m not feeling my best today so I’ll be staying at home tonight. I don’t want to get you sick so stays home ill call you. Love, Ryan.” I remember now…he did call me… I rejected the call because I would get fired if my boss saw me. Work should be behind me. Why wasn’t I there for him. Stupid…stupid…stupid.

[b]-End of Chapter 10-[/b]

Tell me whatcha think! <3 you all!
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"I'm gonna high kick you in the face"

[Raindrop Rose]

I have the next chapter ready to be posted tell me when to post it
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"I'm gonna high kick you in the face"

[Crazy diamond]

Post it

Seriously-it's awsome
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Uh huh, holy shit. It's about time you got off my dick.
A few times I've been around that track but your ass is still fat it's gonna stay like that, coz I aint your hollaback boy, I aint your hollaback boy.

Fangs Up! COBRA STYLE!

[Raindrop Rose]

Chapter 11!

Sandy’s P.O.V

It has happened. The most intimate, hottest thing ever has happened. Brendon and I completely together. I might be getting to detailed for you but I feel this way. Perfectly in love from being kept from each other. From every Sunday that he had came in my store to the 2 days we’ve practically been together. I turn over on my back to see Brendon slowly slipping back into his clothes, yet he fell asleep in the middle of putting his pants being zipped. Well of course I took the liberty among myself to do it for him I lied myself over him and put my hands under my to slowly zip and button his pants. I felt perfect as I myself find myself drifting asleep slowly with my hands placed nicely on his manliness yeah that’s right I decided to leave my hands where they feel comfortable.


Brendon’s P.O.V

Not to sure how long I’ve been asleep but I woke up in the same position just with ,y pants zipped up with hands placed neatly over my zipper. A smirk comes over my face as I wrap my arms around her. Just then as I look up I see London looking curiously down at us, her eyes are still bright red with tears falling down as on hits Sandy’s face waking her up. She gracefully wipes it from her cheek and wipes her tired eyes and sits up. She has serious s*x hair and I’m turned on, again. Haha, I wonder what I look like, maybe she feels the same. I just then notice that I am staring at Sandy with a huge smirk on my face, I shake it off as I hear London say “Um…hi?” She was very confused and we all played along. Until Sandy looked at me and signaled for me to get up and follow her. I said “Hey London we’ll be right back okay?” I saw her nod and we continued into an empty hospital room….what’s happening here? Or what will?


London’s P.O.V

What the hell were they doing? I have an idea but let’s not go there…haha…Ryan. Wow….he came out of no where in that subject. This is now the first time all night that I have smiled. Just then a door swings open and there I see Ryan’s doctor “Hello, I have news. He is showing some sign of awareness to his surroundings, and we are hoping that a loved one or someone to that effect can some how connect with him.” At that moment I jumped at the opportunity and quickly said “Oh can I see him, please?” I paused “Please.” He nodded and showed me the way yet I didn’t have to even think twice about which way to go. As I then reach the door I walk in slowly with the doctor examining through the window. “Hey babe.” I said, not to myself. He knew I was there I know it, I felt so much better at this moment. I slowly stroke his long side burns down and stare deep at him. I then slowly kiss his lips and they seemed to stay softly together with mine. Both of our lips were so smooth as if he had just put Chap Stick on. Just as I kiss him one last time almost giving up I feel a kiss back. He is up, he is okay. This kiss was so amazing; it was almost as a struggle for us to reach each other. His eyes are still closed for each kiss, we continued for about a couple minutes but it seemed like only seconds, they were so sweet, so perfect I couldn’t stop myself. I’m sure he doesn’t understand much right now. But I know he knows it is me. He wouldn’t kiss anyone else as neither would I. We are so in love.

-End of Chapter 11-
Tell me what you guys think! You all rock Luv ya! Oh and thanx a bunch Crazy diamond havent met you acctually :O
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"I'm gonna high kick you in the face"

[Crazy diamond]

"She has serious s*x hair"
love that

np, great fic....

Well now you have met me *waves* Hi, love your avatar btw *swoon*
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Uh huh, holy shit. It's about time you got off my dick.
A few times I've been around that track but your ass is still fat it's gonna stay like that, coz I aint your hollaback boy, I aint your hollaback boy.

Fangs Up! COBRA STYLE!

[musicmakesmeloco]

heyyy Crazy Diamond... what's your name? I'm Bec && the writer of this fic is Sarah *shakes hand*

SARAH! I WANT MORE! MORE MORE MORE! NOW! I know you're online, and i want it, NOW!
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Say my name, and his in the same breath, I
Dare you to say they taste the same,
Let the leaves fall off in the summer
And let December glow in flames

Brace myself and let go,
Start it over again in Mexico
These friends, they don't love you
They just love the hotel suites, now

I don't care what you think
'Cuz as long as it's about me
The best of us can find happiness
In misery

Oh, take a chance, let your body get a tolerance,
I'm not a chance, but a heat wave in your pants
Pull a breath like another cigarette,
Pawn Shop, I'm trading up (trading up)

I'm the oracle in my chest,
Let the guitar scream like a fascist,
Sweat it out, shut your mouth,
Free love on the streets, but
In the alley and I ain't that cheap, now

[Crazy diamond]

Lol, hi Bec, hi Sarah. I'm Joanne, or Jo-don't really have a preference.


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Uh huh, holy shit. It's about time you got off my dick.
A few times I've been around that track but your ass is still fat it's gonna stay like that, coz I aint your hollaback boy, I aint your hollaback boy.

Fangs Up! COBRA STYLE!

[Raindrop Rose]

Hello Jo! Im happy you are here lol!

Sorry it takes me soooo long to update its lame how long it takes me lol! You guys just keep puching me and I will be like I luv you and Ill write lol!
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"I'm gonna high kick you in the face"

[Raindrop Rose]

[quote="Crazy diamond"]"She has serious s*x hair"
love that

np, great fic....

Well now you have met me *waves* Hi, love your avatar btw *swoon*[/quote]

LOL! Im lame haha "serious s*x hair" I just had to put the star lol!

Thanx Gemma made it for me she is the bomb! lol
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