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Ryan Brendon Ross Urie Dedicated Fan

Joined: 27 Dec 2008 Posts: 1513 Location: Dancing with Surge
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Posted: Sat Jun 27, 2009 7:17 pm Post subject: No Name Yet :P |
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Okay, so I told some of my friends on here that I was writing a fanfic and here it is. Well I have written almost five chapters so what i'm going to do is post one chapter per day (if you like this first chapter) and each day i'm going to write another chapter until the fanfic is done : ) (PS. it doesn't make since at first, and it doesn't have a tittle yet lol)
Chapter 1
"If I had an apple, I would probably eat it, but only if it was a green apple. I don't really like red apples, I think they taste weird. Don't ask why, but I just do, I don't know. But that's my opinion, whats yours? Do you like green apples or red apples, why? Bananas are good too, but carrots are better. When I eat carrots, I always dip it in thick, but creamy ranch dressing. Whenever I want carrots, but cant get any, I write about pop-tarts. I think that's okay, but hey, pop-tarts are a whole different story"
Sara Davis was giving her first announced report to her 7Th period language arts class. She felt really confident about her report.
"D"
Mr. Urie had told Sara that her grade was a D.
"A D!? But Mr. Urie. . .a D!? Mr. Urie, I took one forth of my day-"
"Ms. Davis, Ms. Davis, please sit down"
Mr. Urie interrupted
"But-"
"see me after class Ms. Davis, now sit down"
By now, Mr. Urie's tone of voice was getting higher. Sara sat down and waited for the bell to ring so she could talk to her language arts teacher.
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As the bell rang, almost all of the class fled the classroom fro their next class. The 'populars' always stayed in the classroom just to get into the teachers' business.
"OMG, thank you bell!"
Sara shouted. In the back, Sara could hear the populars talking.
"She must have a crush on Mr. U, like why else would she like be so exited to talk to a teacher. Sara is like so weird."
Sara decided to not even bother with them. She was standing at M. Urie's desk, then finally broke the silence asking why she got a D.
"Well Ms. Davis, the class, including you, was assigned to write a one hundred word essay on your favorite fruit, not a one hundred word essay on fruits and carrots dipped in ranch. you were off topic, and you didn't even say which is your favorite. To be honest, I don't even think yo got the concept of this assignment."
Mr. Urie had given a 'speech' like this one about five or six times each year. Before Sara got to talk, one of the populars chimed in.
"Mr. Urie, can I get a pass to my next class?"
While waiting for Mr. Urie to get done writing a pass, Sara mumbled the words she would soon find out she would regret ever saying.
"Excuse me Ms.Davis, would you like to say something? Because I still have about 35 minutes of my grading period."
Sara knew that she had to answer Mr.Urie,anyone who didn't say what they mumbled usually got a detention,and if they lied they would get a referral. Sara sighed then spoke.
"I mumbled, if you didn't like my report, why didn't you just give me an F?"
"Look Ms. Davis, I have been working here for almost 14 years. I think I would know how to grade assignments."
Mr.Urie had informed Sara.
"So your saying that's the grade that my assignment earned?"
"Yes Ms.Davis that would be correct."
Mr.Urie answered quickly,you could tell that he was ready to answer Sara's question.
"Okay Mr.Urie,well is there a way I could make up the D? "
"yes there is one way.Redo the report,but this time you have to use 200 words. I think you might know why."
Sara answered the way Mr.Urie had hoped.
"Yes Mr.Urie I know why ,and thank you for letting me redo the report,I really appreciate it."
"You are very welcome , and Ms. Davis, remember that I think you have the potential to pass my class with an A"
Mr. Urie smiled at Sara, and she started to grin.
"Well Ms. Davis, I think its time for you to go to your next class. What class are you in? I'm going to write you a pass"
"Uh, i'm in. . .oh yeah, right now i'm in second period science with Mrs. Jenkins."
Mr. Urie wrote Sara a pass to Mrs. Jenkins' class. Sara took the pass and left the room.
There was only twenty minutes left in second period and Sara didn't want to miss anymore of science, because science was Sara's favorite class. She hated to miss any part of it. Sara hurried to her locker. She had a bottom locker because she was a seventh grader, and only earth graders got top lockers. After getting her supplies, Sara started thinking about what her favorite fruit was. She got so distracted she didn't see a kid running toward her. The kid was looking down, so they didn't see Sara right in front of them. They ran into each other and both of them fell to the floor.
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Well, I said that it didn't make since. And I would BET that you think Mr. Urie is Brendon, huh? well if you guys liked that chapter, you will find out more in chapter 2  _________________ Edward hesitated to himself, to see if this was safe, to make sure that he was still in control of his need.
And then his cold, marble lips pressed very softly against mine.
Edward and Bella's first kiss!! XD
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FueledByPanic Dancing on the floor

Joined: 22 Jan 2009 Posts: 222 Location: A valley in Colorado
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Posted: Tue Jun 30, 2009 12:21 pm Post subject: |
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I know teachers like that. Sometimes they'll give you a bad grade and say they wanted more than just the prompt but when you do write more it's also cause for a bad grade. _________________ Always, I know / You'll be at my show |
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Lily Hepburn Dedicated Fan

Joined: 12 May 2007 Posts: 1885 Location: Ye Nan
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Posted: Sun Jul 05, 2009 2:52 pm Post subject: |
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When i started reading this i thought it was gonna be all 'Your grade is low.. you cna make it better bye....'
BOWCHIKABOWWOW
LMAO
sounds boss though
keep it up i wanna read more xD
xx _________________ Ambie bambie,
Amberella
Is currently bumming:
LILY ALLEN!
Brent Wilson <3
Please don't Judge me for this, I allow you to bum who you bum, so let me bum who i bum
Things can be nice :
So your Daughters depressed, well get her straight on the prozac but little do you know she already takes c**ck |
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Ryan Brendon Ross Urie Dedicated Fan

Joined: 27 Dec 2008 Posts: 1513 Location: Dancing with Surge
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Posted: Sun Jul 05, 2009 3:57 pm Post subject: |
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Thanks guys
TBH, what I was going to do is wait until I had at least 5 comments before I posted another chapter, but you two are the only ones who have commented, and I think its been about a week since I posted it. So when i'm aloud on the computer, i'll post Chapter 2  _________________ Edward hesitated to himself, to see if this was safe, to make sure that he was still in control of his need.
And then his cold, marble lips pressed very softly against mine.
Edward and Bella's first kiss!! XD
http://www.youtube.com/user/CindyChina1995#p/f/11/YqXQ7veyZeg
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Masquerade Site Admin

Joined: 05 Jun 2007 Posts: 4820 Location: Sleeping in the rain
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Posted: Sun Jul 05, 2009 4:11 pm Post subject: |
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| TomFletcherIsGodLAD wrote: | When i started reading this i thought it was gonna be all 'Your grade is low.. you cna make it better bye....'
BOWCHIKABOWWOW
LMAO
sounds boss though
keep it up i wanna read more xD
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That is HILARIOUS! I must admit, I thought something sketchy was gonna happen too....
Post the next chapter! I really want to read more  _________________
Insomniac depression or Ryan Ross obsession?<3
  
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Ryan Brendon Ross Urie Dedicated Fan

Joined: 27 Dec 2008 Posts: 1513 Location: Dancing with Surge
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Posted: Sun Jul 05, 2009 6:57 pm Post subject: |
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Hehe, I see now.
Well, my mom said I get the computer for four hours a day, so i'll try to post another chapter tomorrow.  _________________ Edward hesitated to himself, to see if this was safe, to make sure that he was still in control of his need.
And then his cold, marble lips pressed very softly against mine.
Edward and Bella's first kiss!! XD
http://www.youtube.com/user/CindyChina1995#p/f/11/YqXQ7veyZeg
http://www.myspace.com/cindychinac |
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Ryan Brendon Ross Urie Dedicated Fan

Joined: 27 Dec 2008 Posts: 1513 Location: Dancing with Surge
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Posted: Tue Jul 07, 2009 10:31 am Post subject: |
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Chapter 2
Sara looked up at what she realised to be a guy, a guy who looked familiar to someone she knew.The guy was standing above her with his hand out to help her up
"I'm so sorry , I should have not been running in the hall, I didn't know you were there, i'm so sorry."
Sara stood there looking at him talk to her. He noticed that Sara had gone into her La La Land, what with the way she looked like she wasn't paying attention to him.
"Excuse me girl, are you okay?. . . 'Cause your looking at me in a weird way"
A moment passed, then Sara finally spoke.
"Oh, I'm sorry I don't know what just happened to me."
"Okay, so were even"
He started to grin at Sara, then continued talking.
"Hey girl whats your name?"
"It sure isn't girl" Sara started to laugh "I'm sorry, I can be sarcastic sometimes. My name is Sara, whats-"
"Brendon, my name is Brendon"
Brendon looked at Sara the way she looked at him a minute ago. Sara bent over to pick up the stuff that had fallen out of her bag when she ran into Brendon. Brendon helped her then looked at her again. By the look on his face, you could tell he was looking at how beautiful Sara was. He was thinking about her shinny, thick brown hair. Her facial expression when she smiled. Her eyes so creamy chocolate brown. The way her hair went down to her chest. Brendon thought he could look at her for hours, but then he realised that they both had to get to class.
"Uh well, maybe we should get back to class"
Sara said this like she was reading his mind
"Yeah, I guess we should. I guess i'll see you around?"
Sara shook her head to motion 'yes'. Sara and Brendon moved around each other then started walking to their classes. Wile Sara was walking to her classroom, the only thing she could think about was her encounter with Brendon. Sara was thinking about Brendon the was he thought about her a minute ago. She thought about his short dark brow hair that could be mistaken for black in some lighting's. That his hair was just barely long enough to touch his shoulders. His eyes were light brown that mach Sara's hair. She thought he was about 5' 6", because she was 5' 4" and Brendon seamed to be just a little taller than her.
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Sara arrived at her science class and handed Mrs. Jenkins her pass. Mrs. Jenkins noticed the time said on Sara's pass.
"Excuse me, Ms. Davis, the time on your pass says 12:25, twenty minutes before class ends"
Sara looked at the clock in the back of of the classroom.
"I would like to mention that it doesnt take ten minutes to get from Mr. Urie's classroom to here, even if you did stop at your locker"
Sara didn't know that she had been talking to Brendon for ten minutes.
"Ms. Davis, would you care to explain how it took you so long to come to class today?
Mrs. Jenkins was the kind of teacher who didn't care if she embarrassed one of her students by asking something right then and there.
"Mrs. Jenkins, I'm sorry, I cant think. . .explain why I'm late."
"Okay well Ms. Davis it will be counted at a tarty."
Sara turned around then walked to her seat wile rolling her eyes at the fact that she looked at a boy so long.
The bell rang for l first lunch and Sara was the first one out of her science classroom. She had second lunch, so she had to go to her fifth period class. Sara knew she only had three minutes left before the bell rang and she was looking for Brendon, so she could ask him which lunch he had. She hoped he wasn't in the lunch line if he had first lunch. Sara gave up, then walked to class.
The bell rang for second lunch and Sara left ahead of her best friend without saying anything to her. The only thing Sara was determined to do was find Brendon.
"Wait Sara!!!! Slow down. Come on whats the rush? Hello!? Hello, Sara this is your best friend Nancy talking to you. Slow-"
Nancy bumped into Sara after she suddenly stopped walking. Like in some shows, Nancy finished what she was saying.
"down." _________________ Edward hesitated to himself, to see if this was safe, to make sure that he was still in control of his need.
And then his cold, marble lips pressed very softly against mine.
Edward and Bella's first kiss!! XD
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shimmerecko Dedicated Fan

Joined: 26 Jan 2009 Posts: 1585 Location: where your not :)
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Posted: Sun Jul 12, 2009 7:57 am Post subject: |
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Ryan Brendon Ross Urie Dedicated Fan

Joined: 27 Dec 2008 Posts: 1513 Location: Dancing with Surge
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Posted: Sun Aug 30, 2009 1:58 am Post subject: |
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Sorry I havent been on, I got grounded from the computer XP
Anyway, I'll be typeing the next chapter when ever I can and when its done I'll put it on here
I'm sorry that you've had to wait!  _________________ Edward hesitated to himself, to see if this was safe, to make sure that he was still in control of his need.
And then his cold, marble lips pressed very softly against mine.
Edward and Bella's first kiss!! XD
http://www.youtube.com/user/CindyChina1995#p/f/11/YqXQ7veyZeg
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musicmakesmeloco Sure As Hell Aint Normal

Joined: 15 Apr 2007 Posts: 3424 Location: building a coffin your size
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Posted: Wed Sep 02, 2009 11:55 pm Post subject: |
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amagawd i knew it i knew it! hahaha
lol sorry i havent been on in ages but i just started reading this then, and as soon as she bumped into that guy in the first chapter i knew it would be brendon. hahahahahaha. is he mr urie's son? love this story. more yes. |
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