The Suns Not Coming Up + 2 new!

xxiloveryanandbrendonxx · Posted: Thu Nov 01, 2007 5:03 pm Post subject: The Suns Not Coming Up + 2 new!

The Suns Not Coming Up

Im-locked up in here, how to escape?
You dont know me, youll never see, my
face. Your the reason for my pain, the
reason for me quitting the game. That light
in the distance, watch it disappear, youll see
soon whats really out here.

I see right through you and boy you knew
you knew. The suns not coming up, Why d
you show up? you heard
my screams and there your were...

Shut up, Shut Up, Dont speak to me, i dont wanna
hear another word, from you. Im so sick of it, this or
that? tell me the fact of the matter, you see now its
shattered, so broken, so hurt, so invisible, so...

I see right through you and boy you knew
you knew. The suns not coming up, Why d
you show up? you heard
my screams and there your were...

We lived and we laughed but now were just a memory lost
forever...
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"Colonel Mustang is dead sexy...IN A MINISKIRT!"

musicmakesmeloco · Posted: Thu Nov 01, 2007 9:38 pm Post subject:

wow... that's so cool

is it a song???
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It's not me, it's you
Actually, it's the taxidermy of you and me
Untie the balloons from around my neck and ground me
I'm just a racehorse on the track
Send me back to the glue factory
Always thought I'd float away
And never come back
But I've got enough miles on my car
To fly the boys home on my own
But you know me: I like being all alone
And keeping you all alone
And the charts are boring
And the kids are snoring
And the girl's in a sling
You say you're not listening and I said I'm wishing...
And I said... I said...

xxiloveryanandbrendonxx · Posted: Fri Nov 02, 2007 4:47 am Post subject:

Its supposed to be
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"Colonel Mustang is dead sexy...IN A MINISKIRT!"

musicmakesmeloco · Posted: Sat Nov 03, 2007 12:47 pm Post subject:

that's what I thought... it's really good BTW...
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It's not me, it's you
Actually, it's the taxidermy of you and me
Untie the balloons from around my neck and ground me
I'm just a racehorse on the track
Send me back to the glue factory
Always thought I'd float away
And never come back
But I've got enough miles on my car
To fly the boys home on my own
But you know me: I like being all alone
And keeping you all alone
And the charts are boring
And the kids are snoring
And the girl's in a sling
You say you're not listening and I said I'm wishing...
And I said... I said...

xxiloveryanandbrendonxx · Posted: Sat Nov 03, 2007 5:04 pm Post subject:

Thanks, tell me your honest opinion, if its bad, tell me. It wont hurt my feelings. Whoops, i forgot a line!
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"Colonel Mustang is dead sexy...IN A MINISKIRT!"

xxiloveryanandbrendonxx · Posted: Sat Nov 03, 2007 5:07 pm Post subject:

Ok fixed it
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"Colonel Mustang is dead sexy...IN A MINISKIRT!"

musicmakesmeloco · Posted: Mon Nov 05, 2007 10:31 pm Post subject:

no seriously i honestly love it... i swear
_________________
It's not me, it's you
Actually, it's the taxidermy of you and me
Untie the balloons from around my neck and ground me
I'm just a racehorse on the track
Send me back to the glue factory
Always thought I'd float away
And never come back
But I've got enough miles on my car
To fly the boys home on my own
But you know me: I like being all alone
And keeping you all alone
And the charts are boring
And the kids are snoring
And the girl's in a sling
You say you're not listening and I said I'm wishing...
And I said... I said...

xxiloveryanandbrendonxx · Posted: Tue Nov 06, 2007 5:35 am Post subject:

Thanks....
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"Colonel Mustang is dead sexy...IN A MINISKIRT!"

xxiloveryanandbrendonxx · Posted: Fri Dec 28, 2007 8:59 am Post subject:

New Song!

But btw i wrote it at 1:00am so its really dumb

Some Girl

Fade to Grey
Black out he lights
Yeah ive heard about it
Shining Stars
Yellow Nights
Its all been said
Except...

The "Dont Go there with me"
Or "See where she'll be in a couple of years"
That some girl
That nothing
But maybe there's something....

Take a real loser
You can change all her clothes and her make up and replace it all
But you dont make the call
She's all the same where it really matters
Inside

The "Dont go there with me"
Or "see where she'll be in a couple of years"
That some girl
That nothing
or maybe...
Just maybe there's something....

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"Colonel Mustang is dead sexy...IN A MINISKIRT!"

xxiloveryanandbrendonxx · Posted: Fri Dec 28, 2007 9:00 am Post subject:

I dunno what to call this next one. If yall could give me some suggestions...

?

Its something that i used to have
But now its taken snatched and grabbed
I dont know what happened to my story
Lifes so strange and full of glory

Running for something
Crawling before
Now you werent ever
enough anymore
Do you really want to know?

Posing little threat to much
Youve left me broken with a crutch
I had to walk in just right then
Felt like stepping on a pin
Never want to know what its like
Living on the edge all the time

Running for something
Crawling before
Now you werent ever
enough anymore
Do you really want to know?

So what do you think?

Please comment on both!
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"Colonel Mustang is dead sexy...IN A MINISKIRT!"